Friday, 22 June 2012

FSF: Faeries

She pranced around, from flower to flower, her silvery white wings fluttering in the light breeze.

The sweet smell of roses, the bubbling waterfall nearby, the bright sun, all added to the serenity of her surroundings.

She closed her eyes and tried to lose herself into this beautiful, perfect world.

Thats when the alarm clock rang- the shrill sound of reality.

Fairytales were good but now it was time to wake up.

14 comments:

  1. I love this! Reminds me of how we can all have our "fairytale" moment and then boom, reality strikes! Gorgeous details! I could picture every word.

    ReplyDelete
  2. This reminds me of the wonderful flying dreams I had as a child. Lovely imagery.

    ReplyDelete
  3. Man, alarm clocks are the ruination of all amazing fairy tale dreams. :)

    ReplyDelete
  4. From time to time, we all need to escape from the harsh reality of this world into a peaceful, therapeutic, fantasy zone... it keeps us going!
    I'm visiting from FSF.

    ReplyDelete
  5. Ah, nooooo don't wake up! I hate the tyranny of the alarm clock....!

    Nice work!!

    ReplyDelete
  6. nice piece as light as the imagery described

    ReplyDelete
  7. I was having the same dream...but, oh, that darn clock...back to harsh reality. Nice work.

    ReplyDelete
  8. How fun...it would be fun to have a fairy dream!

    ReplyDelete
  9. Such lovely imagery... vibrant and fun.

    ReplyDelete
  10. Thanks for the great feedback!

    ReplyDelete
  11. Loved the imagery in the beginning!

    ReplyDelete
  12. So many great dreams blasted by the darned alarm clock!


    http://www.thejadedlens.com/2012/06/26/pandemos/

    ReplyDelete
  13. Ack! I do so hate when the alarm interupts a beautiful dream!! Excellent writing :)

    ReplyDelete
  14. You did a great job painting a tempting image of escape. I especially enjoyed that second sentence. Well done!

    ReplyDelete

Related Posts Plugin for WordPress, Blogger...