Friday, 7 February 2014

FSF: Ache


               (Image taken from http://lilliemcferrin.com)

Somewhere in the deepest confines of his frosted heart something ripped. 
It was a strange sensation.
A cry built up inside him threatening to break his carefully stitched calm.
The onslaught of all these internal reactions confused him. 
It almost felt like being alive again.


Written for Lillie McFerrin's Five Sentence Fiction. 

6 comments:

  1. This is an interesting little story! I wasn't expecting the ending.
    (If this is a multiple post, I apologize)

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  2. The way you describe his "carefully stitched calm" is so apt....precarious calm is often like that. Excellent post.

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  3. Very good post, enjoyed the read.

    I am Yvonne Lewis, one of Arlee Bird's Ambassadors for the A to Z Challenge, I look forward to visiting you during the challenge Good luck.

    Yvonne.

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  4. Hi, Sania. I saw you were signed up for the A to Z Challenge, so I wanted to stop by and say hi!

    Susanne
    From the Market to the Plate
    Volunteer for the 2014 A to Z Challenge (Stormy Sidekick)

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  5. Ooh! I like it. I really like it. Lady, are you in on the flash fiction scene, because you've totally got that twist ending in the bag!

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